Sonnet on Peters

Discovering our names had been defaced
Inside the Book at Narrow Gate, we cried,
But Peter Watchman would not find us space
Within and left us in the air outside.
Constructing there with rusty nails our shacks,
We raised a shanty town for souls unkept.
But hoping still for peace, unpacked our sacks;
We laughed and shared our dreams until all slept.

Awakened! Blinding angel builders come -
We cower, covering our ears in hands
For hammers deafen to convert our slum.
And hark! Hear Peter Foreman give commands:
"Aid, sleeping craftsmen, our advancing wall!
Make Heaven's suburbs; live in holy sprawl!"

4 Responses to “Sonnet on Peters”

  1. Kevin Kevin Says:

    This was inspired largely by Mark's last post, though I think I went a bit too far.

  2. Mark Mark Says:

    I havn't been sucessful in convincing my pastor that suburban sprawl is holy…hehe…

  3. Mark Mark Says:

    Mrs. Turpin stood there, her gaze fixed on the highway, all
    her muscles rigid, until in five or six minutes the truck reappeared,
    returning. She waited until it had had time to turn
    into their own road. Then like a monumental statue coming
    to life, she bent her head slowly and gazed, as if through the
    very heart of mystery, down into the pig parlor at the hogs.
    They had settled all in one corner around the old sow who
    was grunting softly. A red glow suffused them. They appeared to
    pant with a secret life.

    Until the sun slipped finally behind the tree line, Mrs. Turpin
    remained there with her gaze bent to them as if she were absorbing
    some abysmal life-giving knowledge. At last she lifted her head.
    There was only a purple streak in the sky, cutting through a field of
    crimson and leading, like an extension of the highway, into the
    descending dusk. She raised her hands from the side of the pen in a
    gesture hieratic and profound. A visionary light settled in her eyes.
    She saw the streak as a vast swinging bridge extending upward from
    the earth through a field of living fire. Upon it a vast horde of souls
    were tumbling toward heaven. There were whole companies of
    white trash, clean for the first time in their lives, and bands of black
    niggers in white robes, and battalions of freaks and lunatics
    shouting and clapping and leaping like frogs. And bringing up the
    end of the procession was a tribe of people whom she recognized at
    once as those who , like herself and Claud, had always had a little of
    everything and the given wit to use it right. She leaned forward to
    observe them closer. They were marching behind the others with
    great dignity, accountable as they had always been for good order
    and common sense and respectable behavior. They, alone were on
    key. Yet she could see by their shocked and altered faces even their
    virtues were being burned away. She lowered hands and gripped the
    rail of the hog pen, her eyes small but fixed unblinkingly on what lay
    ahead. In a moment the vision faded but she remained where she
    was.

    At length she got down and turned off the faucet and in her slow
    way on the darkening path to the house. In woods around her the
    invisible cricket choruses had struck up, but what she heard were
    the voices of the souls climbing upward into the starry field and
    shouting hallelujah.

    F. O'Connor

  4. Kevin Kevin Says:

    Hmm, the comparison of my work to Flanner O'Connor's is not particularly flattering. But thanks for the snippet!

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